Novel_Lover459
nice chapter just a suggestion can you give him ki from black clover some techniques like ki sense: ki-sensing can be used as an additional sense to predict attacks and others' movements,[1][7] including natural objects and events found in nature.[8][9] It can even locate invisible people.[10] By deliberately manipulating their ki, some mages can temporarily boost their magic power and physical strength[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
and for second part I think you should add some powerful villain aur reincarnated person in some villain body so he can come back or have some power they can fight with or else the story will become boring like other , and one more thing that someone should have some psychological mind problem or you can just say pawn of some greater villain that he has to face in end of the story I can also give you best villain for reincarnating different soul in monarch of dragon or Antares