ShadowKatake
Welp, for the first chapter I feel like it was a bit rushed, but meh, who am I to complain, I just hope MC doesn't become too unreasonable also Katake, I think you should try reading some other novels too, other than Chinese mtl, you've improved your Chinese style writing to the point, it's hardly distinctable now. Tho, I like it too. Just hopes for a mixture of western and Asian style.