Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon - The Timeless Journey

Thanks for the chapter i really like the world building i also read some pokemon fanfictions like rise of dark pokemon or the bounty hunter one. This novel at the start feels similar to those well apart from the fact that there is no goldfinger. The only thing i want to suggest is that is better to keep the number of pokemon trained very low like 1 or 2 at the beginning and 6 later in the story. That is the reason why i never finished a pokemon fanfiction because at the end i fells like collecting pokemons with no real reason or purpose. Anyway good luck for the novel my powerstones of the day are yours when i received them that is.

Great system 👏 Loved it (and the chapter wasn't boring, don't worry). That said, I see VM influence already. Great job with the danger alert levels. You picked a good aspect :) Just one suggestion, don't make levelling too easy (especially at higher levels). Kinda ruins the fun.

Please, No Fakemon...

Thanks for the not chapter(info dump)-.-

Ever since I read Pokémon - Mystical Journey I've been trying to find a fic with the same feel, I hope your fic is as good.

I think a better option instead of blood alert would be scarlet alert or crimson alert since you are using colors, I don't see much point in using blood.

How did you manage to make the pokemon world into some type of generic cultivation novel. 'Talent' come on really.

Thx

Comecei a ler agora e pelo visto tem bastante potencial, contanto que não largue a história deve ser muito boa, vou ler mais e avaliar melhor