Comments of chapter undefined of Journey Of The Myriad Paths Immortal Empress
Journey Of The Myriad Paths Immortal Empress
JustJae
Chapter comments12
That's so sad but I completely understand. It's weird though because I've read stories that aren't even 1/10th as good as this but got contracted. I don't know about monetization but don't forget there are many other platforms out there. Best of luck, I'll miss Xi and Wen and your daily updates. ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜
I’m becoming more invested in this story and I’m sad to see this has come to a stop before her journey could even begin. I can see a potential in this story that it will be worthwhile to see the end of it. I hope that this story will be continued in some way or another. Anyway, there are somethings that I gotta say about this story. Overall, I like how developed the characters are. At first, it may look like the characters are some typical young masters who don’t use their brain, a greedy lord whose only objective is to gain a power just for the sake of it, but no. There are a lot more to the characters in this story and I think that’s one of the strongest points of this novel that I like. I like how this novel can bring the readers to immerse in the emotions of the characters. About the world building, I’d say it isn’t much talked about yet. But it’s good since it isn’t really relevant to know more of that stuff since the mc is just on her way to her real journey. The update stability is fantastic, even though I only read this book for like a day or two but I can see that there are 2 daily chapters released without fail. I really like the plot, although mc is still struggling a lot with herself, that just shows that there’s more room for her personal growth. I wish I could see the end though, this current self of her… with 18 wives in the harem 🤣, honestly I’m pretty curious to see that! On the other hand, I’m not that knowledgeable about writing but as a reader, the first prologue is definitely confusing because a lot was happening and I don’t know why this character is even being mentioned and they were not even being introduced so it’s like I was not able to fully get anything in the prologue so I just kinda discard them somewhere in my memory. The second prologue, however, gave me a glimpse of what was happening and what’s about to happen. I think if the execution can be improved, maybe give more details of what’s happening than a lot of descriptors that aren’t that relevant but more focused on the situation, then it will attract more viewers. Maybe it’s just me who’s lazy to read long descriptors of a place but I usually skip all that and more focused on the dialogue on the characters to get more context of what’s happening in the situation. But hey, not that it’s bad, some may appreciate it and some may not. In short, I think if parts like that can be revised then it’s better. Anyway, I hope to see this story to be continued sometime and many thanks to the author for sharing this wonderful story. I wish you all the best for your next work!
