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Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnated In Mahabharat with Seven Deadly Sins System

cosmicRider
cosmicRiderLv3cosmicRider

brother good work but may I advise you please skip the useless part it feels like you are using chat gpt because of the language and plane type of writing try to add your own touch in it and skip the useless part like how great and mighty they look blaah blaah blaah try to make this story interesting instead of keeping it plane and simple try to add your own touch in this saga baki great work 👍

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Daddy_strikes_
Daddy_strikes_AuthorDaddy_strikes_

I think you misunderstood, I am using this type of language to match the style how nobles spoke in ancient times when facing their citizens. So it's only natural for them to use this type of language in this situation.

IceMonarch
IceMonarchLv4IceMonarch

Uhm author if possible can you not use improvisation from chat gpt? it's kind of making the story and narrative look a bit bland in my opinion.. you may use the chat gpt to check grammar and spelling mistakes but not for improvisation please. and also will you go with the tv serial route to introduce karna or from texts?

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Aswin_SS
Aswin_SSLv4Aswin_SS

Will bro be joining the Mahabharat war?

John_Wick_0272
John_Wick_0272Lv4John_Wick_0272

nice chapter bro but hope you will skip useless parts except that I like the fanfiction.

Aswin_SS
Aswin_SSLv4Aswin_SS

So excited for the next chap 👦