swamp_dune_forest
This story while soundly structured is flat there is no cheat ,or special power up, no drive to get strong fast, and Is not absuing his future or modern knowledge. You should put in the summary that this is a slow paced fanfic.
swamp_dune_forest:What other thing that he can abuse? Does he have modern industrial mechanic? Does he have material to make it, like polymer, aluminum, or stainless steel that made from this modern specialized equipment?