tatsumi_o
Well, I appreciate you making a Ben 10 fanfic as he is my favorite hero, but this is dumb! You’re telling me that he fought catwoman as Fourarms and lost in a prison cell! There are multiple problems with this. First of all most prison’s don’t put man and woman in the same cell, much less a dc universe, second issue him losing to catwoman as Fourarms, I don’t even how this prison cell can hold Fourarms as it isn’t big enough and he’s also very loud, him being 12ft tall, and I think you made the omnitrix a 10 minute time limit so it’s even more ridiculous as to how dodged him for that long without her being tired. Third issue is him being in Ben body he should have knowledge on how to fight in alien form and human form, yeah I know he just got into his body but even so with him fighting aliens and gods he should at least have his reflexes to put a decent fight. Sorry for the critical and long review, but it shows how this short chapter have this much problems and issues, I hope you improve to make better chapters.
well love the concept of ben 10 transmigration in dc, most if not all the good ben 10 fics in dc are dropped even when they received a good support in the first chaps, my only problem is 1) the fight with cat woman, she is not an skilled assassin, and mc has the memories of bad ben so he has no reason to just easily know her out or just hold her to avoid her trying to punch him, its literally impossible that with mcs far superior stats he cant simply grab her and knocker out, or just hold her in her place with her being unable to do anything.2) the love interest I read you will make one night stands if you are doing any romance and I'm not a fan of jumping form girl to girl without purpose. really a shame because its the only ben 10 fic that is constantly updating sighh