Comments of chapter undefined of Ultimate Overpowered Lust System
Ultimate Overpowered Lust System
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have you ever heard the name of space between words and prospective or p u v or have your brain just stop working because maximum of the time you can't even understand who is speaking to whom story is really good but the f*** man your way of writing like you are just writing this story and story is really good but the f*** man your way of writing like you are just writing this story you don't even want to do any extra work like your brain has stopped working and you have never read any other FanFiction or system rest stories at least this shows who is talking to whom at what time by adding something some kind of science some kind of Mark some kind of box or board but no
Some of your Criticisms have already been long resolved in future chapters. I have drafts of chapters going up to slightly above chapter 80. And For as long as they remain unpublished I may periodically make minor plot changes and make small additions to those chapters however in this case I have already taken care of it before. As for you made your Criticisms in regards to grammar, I have started going over some of the first chapters and fixing any errors I found aswell as adding spaces between the " ". I hope it will help clear out any confusion on who's talking and when. All new drafts are now written in such a way and soon enough all existing chapters will have that issue fixed. I write as a hobby. As of now I haven't received anything for my writing, not a single penny. This is a story I'm writing solely for fun and I hope you will continue having fun reading it.