Frona_Gorgophone
Why are sasuke and Sakura using shadow clones… they take enough chakra to kill a chunin to make one… very inconsistent writing.
Frona_Gorgophone:Huh? They are not using Kage Bunshin. They are only using regular Bunshin no Jutsu; the one that they learn in the academy. Did I write it wrong or were you just high when you read it?
The main character seems pretty mature in comparison to ino, idk how old he is but I hope they at least wait till shippiden before anything progresses too far. Regardless I like the way this is going, I assumed this would be a “Sakura bad sasuke edgy evil boy” kinda fic, I like how they seem more human. Overall high hopes good job mr author