Is this story a speedrun or something? It just feels like a diary at this point. I want to see the special moments between MC and others, whether its seggs or just casual convo idk
You should do a few filler chapters of wholesome moments with family and peerage .No need to go 10+ chapters but just make it like filler to make MC have good bond with his family and peerage.Otherwise the it will cause less interest in Mc due to not too much relatability.
