Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: the forsaken
Naruto: the forsaken
BrandonCH_7847
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Hanami is a disciplined character. Calm, silent and thoughtful, though he enjoys fighting. After reaching 50%, have the mc character be balanced. His thoughts and personality are a bit too much out of control. Hating villagers, council and 95% of the shinobi of Konoha, no problem. Despising minato and kushina, absolutely normal. Wishing to have no contact with Naruto, very much acceptable. Wishing to kill Jiraiya if he does something wrong towards him again, everyone can accept that. But he is too aggressive generally. He is a reincarnated person. He knew he was “abandoned” by Minato and kushina, since he was 6. He also can deduce jiraiya having contact with minato and Hiruzen told him one year ago the truth. Jogo might be hotheaded and aggressive, but the mcs own personality should counter balance it to a normal state. Not protecting the village itself, only protecting his friends, no problem. If sand and orochimaru start the Konoha crush plan, paddling the whole time and not saving civilians or konoha shinobi, everyone would do that, though at least it needs to be convincing, at least somewhat. The only thing he would do is helping hiruzen, itachi and maybe whoever he truly befriends. But the rest can burn. Well, sorry for saying this much. I just really enjoy this story, but wish for the Mc to be more calm, rational and normal. He had a hard life in konoha, but he is a traverser and is familiar with the plot, kyubii jinchuriki situation and he is powerful and will only grow more. With jogo and hanamis abilities, there will be no one below the six paths level, except for Madara and Hashirama who can defeat him. His physical strength, thanks to the jjk template is way above of that of ninjas. Jjk techniques are also very broken. Once he gains yuki, sukuna, gojo or megumi mahoraga, he could be said to have entered the six paths level and having all them, he might become a top tier.
