The3Entities
I would strongly and fiercely deny that this story is mediocre. like, dude, have you read anything online?!???? you characters are amazing, real, and CONSISTENT. your plot is dynamic, consistent, and well thought out. 0 problems at all, and nearly no inconsistencies (aside from an earlier comment, which has no baring on the story). you NEED to continue this. if all your works are this consistent (they have been so far), you gotta keep this up. I can't wait till the next parts come out