Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel : Grey Matter as Illegitimate son of Tony Stark

Idk if it's me but his actions in this chapter are cringe.

I hope MC fuse his Galvan/Galvin powers with his Human form and also some OP power-up with infinite growth (adaptation & evoluton type) that will grow slowly or in medium or instant pace, however the Author like it.

I hope he goes his own way as in making his own tech and not just leaching off Tony's ideas I hope he can make is own suit that unique to him thanks for the chapter

SA is cring are you making an evil MC this just read as an Indian guy fantasy reincarnated into US to SA woman, not a good look

Brother, I didn't come just to criticize, I wanted to read a good story but this is becoming more and more embarrassing. Did you want to write a fanfic for Otakus or what? It looks like the script of a bad anime Of romance

Bro he is born in 2004 so how can he be 15 year old in 2012

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thanks for the chapter ☺️

the bad grammar is very noticable.

In this chapter the protagonist only remains a total pervert for Susan and the readers, he seems like an Otaku without female affection

Great chapter wish there was more chapters

Plus you try to make Susan adorable and it doesn't work, it's just embarrassing to read.

(Translator) Hello, The story sounds interesting, the writing and narration need to be improved, too many thoughts and little dialogue, and some narration and points of view would be missing.

Thanks for the chapter on a good story.

Please more chapters