Alex_Simmonds
Good luck with the story. But for me, this is seriously boring. The author is constantly interrupting the flow of his plot with some BS. There is too much 'system machinations' inserted in between the plot and it seriously ruins the flow of the story. The motivations of the MC are dumb. The MC is dumb. I tried to give it a chance, and to be honest, it did get better than the clusterF it was at the start. But here I am and I feel that reading further would be just a waste of my time. I am simply not having fun because of how stupid some things in the story are. ... If you like the story and have fun reading it, then good for you. I hope you enjoy your time and I also hope the author has fun writing it. Anyway, peace out.