Sesame_Cookies
Not a bad read for a novel. I see a lot of pluses in these chapters and I am satisfied to read further. Maybe a little more info on Owen’s little offsider could be introduced as I dont recall age or family mentioned. Also the village he saved, is that to be relooked at? It seemed rather final just here have a scale, you will be right. If he was looking a developing forces etc then from small beginnings. That small girl (name forgotten) I think he mentioned assassin class, will this be investigated. In the title introduction I saw a few tags one being a harem. Is this going to be one of those Pokémon type harems as all you girls belong to me or will it be intelligently managed? I am ok with harems but like to see they are soundly fleshed out as proper supporting etc Hmm that was a few questions 👍 good luck with this.