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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: Journey to Godhood

Jama1810
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TYSMFTC

Keiou_Owlo
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Hah... I don't really like it when the story turns to the multiverse. They are separate universes, separate lives, different relationships and more lies. If it were for another reality of the world itself, just like Marvel and DC, I wouldn't say anything, but another universe from a completely different series is boring and ridiculous. I know it's only for a few chapters, but since this story is slow-paced, it will take at least 10 chapters, maybe twice as long. It would be much easier to do a new story about the other universe with another protagonist, once you finished this one. Many stories fail because they try to introduce multiverses into their writing, but end up running out of ideas, they simply give up or don't have the recoveries they expected. A useful thing to do with space and time magic is a DBZ time room. Just an idea. Regardless of what I do, I will read it. Just don't linger too long in another universe.

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cryzsalix
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I hope the multiverse stuff is well handled. That matter aside, I almost certain he is going to the "How train your dragón" World.

thesacredmenace
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OK, we are in multiverse territory I'm gonna head out. Been fun peace!

cyberlector_321
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gracias por el capitulo

Claudian_D_Amazon
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MC's romance with the three of them is getting boring, not even romance can be said to be because it remains in this situation of misunderstanding and not talking about feelings right away to eliminate any annoying drama, now he goes to another world and leaves everything behind, of course I believe he will come back maybe?, this just shows how the MC still treats all of this as false and everyone as NPCs.

Baba_Yaga_
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Not a fan of 'world travel' in a HP fic... could've added more original parts in the story rather than travelling 'multiple-worlds'...

Miguelito_Benzon
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hope someday he'll go to Nirn

Khrys_Languin
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dragon quest 8.. medea and Jessica for the win... plus, he counts as a draconian. New spell system and monster taming. Fairy tail... Lucy Levy and Wendy. It's got a god level being, but unless you try to break his laws, he generally ignores you. Access to celestial beings and a time gate and new materials. DxD to be avoided till later. Breath of fire ... Nina... ruins of ancient dragon civilization Hunter x hunter .... shizuku and Machi.... dragons are either smart due to activating nen or dumb beasts. Low to medium in human territory high in dark continent. Learn nen. Then access Greed Island and learn how to make your own version of it. If you wanna go slice of life... dragon maid. There's mousoku,tensura, and a few others but too dangerous at this time.

Yui_Sealfat
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Thank

Blackheart99
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Thanks for the chapter

kinshi
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