cryzsalix
I just enjoy putting my ideas into stories, seeing my characters come to life is very satisfying, and it's even more satisfying when people enjoy what I write. English is not my native language.
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I don't know how to feel about Oleandra's constant displays of incompetence and carelessness that even seem to have gotten worse over time. On the other hand, I suppose they are all growth experiences, and this dragon is a very bad matchup for this challenge.
He is not wrong XD
Trying to defile the female lead Malfoy? That's what I call courting death.
I understand the whole butterfly effect thing, but it's still a bitter feeling to realize that Oleandra's presence has done nothing but change the plot for the worse; at least until now. Ginny is essentially dead, there's an extra Voldemort, Petter got away with it without even being exposed. it's starting to be a bit depressing and looking bad for our protagonist, really.
Okay, I kind of understand that this guy has a grudge against Oleandra's past incarnations... that being said, he still seems like a jerk to me.
They may be cumbersome, but with so many strange activities, practice with levitation spells and flying lessons, those robes would make me feel more comfortable if I were a girl.
Wow, this one got to me. Sad, but well written.
Great detail that she, being less affected, still includes nightmares and so on, a very human reaction on her part. It's also something that a lot of writers are allergic to or something like that.
It's going to give me something if they don't start to suspect even a little bit of Ginny. The number of alerts and suspicious things around her are piling up at an astonishing rate and no one seems to even bat an eyebrow.
Not really a big fan of how the protagonist's personality took a 180 degree turn as soon as she met a cute guy. And I don't know how to feel about the whole thing about her having a predestined guy of a past life, which apparently she had somehow forced into their relationship. On the other hand, you made it clear that she is not the same from her past life so I will wait and see how everything develops. I just hope that regarding the first issue, she doesn't practically become a different, very blushing character every time Cedric or his future equivalents come into the picture.
With all the love I can muster author... go to hell. You said so much and nothing at the same time, leaving me with only suspense. To be honest, when it comes to female protagonists I prefer yuri, either that or you have to give me a very well written and developed male partner (which rarely happens, hence why I prefer yuri.) Frustration aside, I love it your novel.
That's a pretty random way to back out about adding Mafalda instead of Dracco to the club. I've never been a big fan of the descendant of the Malfoys but I guess we'll have to wait and see.
That´s some collateral damage. Poor Dumbledore.