Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: Mind Control

come on why did that have to happend.

This changed direction very quickly, this story was very good until this chapter which killed all my enthusiasm for following the story

He was ambushed and was in a coma for 10 years…? Lol

No me gustó, cambio demasiado la trama de un punto paso a otro, aunque de alguna manera se puede explicar porque puede tener relaciones con luna pero no es su hija, pero pensé que era un mundo paralelo, además la traición y todo lo demás parece demasiado ridículo, la trama iba vien antes pero ahora se fue al carajo, técnicamente forzaste a todos los personajes femeninos a volver al canon

you ruin a perfect story, im gonna drop it

There are stupid moments and then there is this

well this story is now trash

you basically just ruined a perfectly good story if you only did this so you can make it go somewhat the Canon route and make his women pair of with their Canon partners just so the Canon kids are born then this will probably get removed from my library cause I'm not interested in reading NTR

Rip this was such a good story too kinda crazy it had to go like this..

I was waiting for him to confront Voldemort in his prime, defeat him in a duel and half killed him after graduating Hogwarts , became top figure like Dumbledore

What an incredible way to throw your work in the trash. I don't know if you were thinking when you wrote the chapter but this is a new record of how to force the plot in the worst way imaginable

Wait what??? Why did u decide to rush ur story?

Also now the story is going to be NTR both because the girls who loved him had children with someone else and because he will likely continue sleeping with them behind their husbands backs. I’ll say it again what a waste of time. I think author is going to notice his novel dropping out of popular and collection soon. What a shame.

here's your sign

disappointing

He has to get his get back

hahaha soooo glad im not the only one letdown

you completely fumbled with this one 😔😔😔

Rip novel

Why Bones Family ??