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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: Mind Control

Flaashii
FlaashiiLv13Flaashii

It is a good fic but you need to check the grammar because right now it reads like you just translated it and didn't think to check it.

Turista
TuristaLv4Turista

Gracias por el capitulo

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Hollow_Daoist
Hollow_DaoistLv4Hollow_Daoist

Awesome Thanks for the chapters

KoRSito
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Rochirush
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1House_AF
1House_AFLv31House_AF

Excelente trabajo 👏🏻 👍

Helios_Sol
Helios_SolLv5Helios_Sol

we need things that point out who was a virgin and who was not

Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

Thanks for the chapter

Eduardo_Second
Eduardo_SecondLv1Eduardo_Second

Thanks for the chapter

KaxaTana
KaxaTanaLv1KaxaTana

Thanks for chapter

Targas
TargasLv2Targas

he will not share his womans right?

juan_venancio
juan_venancioLv1juan_venancio

Excelente capítulo

Carlos_Ed3ardo
Carlos_Ed3ardoLv1Carlos_Ed3ardo

Lucifer_777
Lucifer_777Lv3Lucifer_777

Спасибо за главу