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Comments of chapter undefined of Azeroth's Last Hope

Caciqxe
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a 5 years old prince commanding grown men with a chosen one plot its kinda forced man, had he done this when he was 14-17 after proving himself as a good warrior would make more sense.love your fic but your kinda going to fast and destroying the plot.for example the base at andorhal would fall to the scourge, take into account that the soldiers need to eat and would end eating contaminated grain from the nearest city (Andorhal). even if he creates private farms for that army the undead from the city would still outnumbered the garrison 20 to 1.it would have served the plot better that after the second war Arthas would conquer Alterac and made it his base and the designated seat of the Crown Prince like the Targaryens do in Asoiaf with Dragonstone and Kingslanding.He could have used the excuse to pacify the region after all the nobles from Alterac tuned to banditry and formed the Syndicate.Just constructive criticism and my personal opinion, i hope you don't take it the wrong way.

Achmad_Udin
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Nice chap brother