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Caciqxe1dCommentedlow rizz, low game
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Huscarls* there was no knights until the Normans
"Well? did you find anything?" King Aella asked with a frustrated tone, how did a child slip away from highly trained knights, he asked himself time and time again. - Caciqxe13dCommented
why is he leaving Judith? I know he is young but is rather shameful of him to take only 1 princess when had 2. Such an inexperienced Viking (•_•)
(AN: So the Bebbenburg mini arc is over. The confrontation with the druids will happen next chapter and it will end next chapter, don't worry it won't be dragged on, after that Ragnar and his men will return. Btw Thorfinn isn't immune to poison or disease, he is just highly resistant as he is only a Demi god. He was under the impression that Eowyn only put nightshade on his bandage, but the fact is she gave it to him constantly, every tonic he took, every time his badge was changed he ingested nightshade, this was why he got worse, the injury combined with the large amounts of poison. I hope you enjoyed the chapter) - Caciqxe22dCommented
Kinda sucks that mc isn't Arthur's heir, and being honest if he isn't then it doesn't add much to the story, it would more like filler chapter. it isn't so farfetched that MC could have a Welsh/Briton ancestor, it's being like 200-400 years, like Vinland Saga Askeladd.
(AN: I'm sure I've made it pretty obvious about the return of Arthur who is the once and future king, I bet many of you will think it's Thorfinn, it's not he has no relation to Arthur. Anyway I hope you enjoyed the chapter.) - Caciqxe27dCommented
Harroway's are extinct from like 2 centuries ago, the only thing that remains from them is the town called Lord Harroway's Town, now House Roote has the lordship of that town.
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so Aegon is going to be king and viserys will only be a side character?
Is Aegon dead click here to know ----><----- - Caciqxe1mthCommented
he ain't wrong, if mc isn't a decent or talented warrior he won't be respected nor taken seriously. hopefully he takes his martial training more seriously.
"You shouldn't worry yourself with matters left to a steward." Robb scoffed, before his father could answer. - Caciqxe1mthCommented
Neutral due to recent history, besides he has some Targaryen blood so maybe he can bond with a Dragon or hatch one.
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so he is nephew of mallister and blackwood, good allies both. aside from that he could claim harrenhal so it would be better if he was a page of lady Whent. and he could probably squire for Barristan.
Heir:Jonothor Darry - Caciqxe2mthCommentedCh 22 Chapter 21 - An Unexpected Maneuver
- Caciqxe3mthCommentedCh 10 Chapter 10: Loss
- Caciqxe4mthCommentedCh 1 Chapter I: Kellian Ordo, Jedi Master
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a 5 years old prince commanding grown men with a chosen one plot its kinda forced man, had he done this when he was 14-17 after proving himself as a good warrior would make more sense.love your fic but your kinda going to fast and destroying the plot.for example the base at andorhal would fall to the scourge, take into account that the soldiers need to eat and would end eating contaminated grain from the nearest city (Andorhal). even if he creates private farms for that army the undead from the city would still outnumbered the garrison 20 to 1.it would have served the plot better that after the second war Arthas would conquer Alterac and made it his base and the designated seat of the Crown Prince like the Targaryens do in Asoiaf with Dragonstone and Kingslanding.He could have used the excuse to pacify the region after all the nobles from Alterac tuned to banditry and formed the Syndicate.Just constructive criticism and my personal opinion, i hope you don't take it the wrong way.
Ch 8 Chapter 8: Surprise - Caciqxe4mthCommented
this ability sucks, how is he going to explain random soldiers appearing out of nowhere,and it would make him see everything like a game rather than his new reality.Besides its too OP.when i read Build i thought it would be like the book of talents in WoW or like CK3 lifestyle focus.
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Moegi Kazamatsuri : are you sure about that?
4 - He won't necessarily have the Wood Style. The Wood Style is unique to Hashirama and possible reincarnations of Ashura, not the Senju clan. - Caciqxe4mthCommented
Is he Mandalorian?(i hope is, that would keep him alive)
I wasn't indoctrinated into the order because my people never had good relationship with the Jedi or galaxy at large, which is ironic since later Jedi helped me lave them, but I digress. Concealing my midichlorian count later wasn't that hard especially when I was able to afford my personal medical droid (I swear I do not brag). - Caciqxe5mthCommented
thats kinda pathetic when you remember how Minato beat 3 jonins
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Uhtred of Bamburgh - The Last Kingdom
(I am considering which anime/shows/book to base it on but I've yet to decide completely but if you have any suggestions let me know and I'll see if they might work) - Caciqxe5mthCommented
not gonna lie his name is lame, why not name him a stark name like Barthogan, Artos, Cregan, Alaric or a Dayne name like Vorian, Arthur and the like?
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