Chaos_Gray
This was dumb. Their relationship moved far too fast and there was no real character development. We know little about Luna's personality/hopes/dreams/fears, nor about Protagonist's. The date was a good opportunity to do some character work but you glossed over it. Also, it was dumb for him to have the others killed, especially since Luna will eventually find out, at which point she will utterly loathe him and it would be very difficult to reconcile that. At least he should have found a way to make her aware of their true natures or waited for them to reveal it themselves before doing anything to them. Bad writing here.