BurgerNoTomatoes
*sigh* I'm not taking back what i said in the other chapter, buuuuuuuuut i dont hate this fic. I hate that i dont hate this. The conversations between him and his system is funny. I like that you changed the teams around and how it affect the plot and team dynamics. I have no doubt the faliure=death will suck later in the fic, but right now it doesnt come up often as the quests dont show up too often to make it too controlling. tl;dr I like what you're... for now