Comments of chapter undefined of The werewolves curse

This chapter had some intriguing developments, especially with your protagonist's visit to Ellen's house. The mystery deepens, and the interaction with Ellen's mother adds an element of suspense. It's clear that there's more to the story, and I'm curious to see how it all unravels. One suggestion is to delve further into the emotions and reactions of your characters. This can help readers connect with them on a deeper level and make the story even more engaging. Also, consider providing a bit more description of the surroundings and the characters' expressions to create a vivid mental picture for your readers. Overall, you're doing a great job of keeping the reader's interest and building anticipation for what comes next. Looking forward to the next chapter!