Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Koyama

tftc

Okay... I was confused at quite a few things in the first chapter, but this one... First the fact that she pretty much immediately gets a mission such as that, the second, she has ice release, and well this one didn't confuse me, but the dialogue during the fight... That was just terrible, why would an assassin talk at all, much less such pointless bs? Not that the dialogue felt in any way natural... =/