Cedric_7512
I’m glad this was a fake-out. The problem a lot of readers are likely experiencing is that this is an unreliable narrator. The MC plans all the time using internal monologue, but when it comes to his plans to neutralize the League of Assassins and play games with them? He kept it from the audience and even forged fake journal entries without letting the reader it was for duping R’as and his ninja brethren. You can’t blame the audience for getting fooled when you go so far to deceive them. Anyway, I love the story. We’ll just have to not trust anything the MC says or does going forward since you’re going to the unreliable narrator route. Thanks for the chapter.
Dont drop it bro, its an amazing story, the line i am vengance god, chills ajaja. Dont let other dictate what you write, even if the story get 1 reader per day, its your story, go for it, follow the criticism that serves to improve the story, the others, dont let them get you. I really hope you dont drop this. Sorry for my english.
God that makes so much more sense now that I realized what was before was just a diary and can be manipulated and not like bruce he was before the training journey. Even I thought it was strange that he didn’t know ras al ghoul with the knowledge and paranoia of Rick and am glad that it was a ruse to lure them into a false sense 😈 though I am glad that little daimian is still going to be born 😁 and shame on those that coment on what is going on without seeing the whole plot through while assuming the worst besides the chapter title says diary entry not a regular part of the story, fools
I knew stuff wasn't adding up but this did indeed reveal a few things that confused me in the last chapter. I do wonder though that if the Mc did or didn't allow Talia to get pregnant & if he did then why. You're pretty good at hiding things author, cause while I'm definitely not the best at finding stuff I've tons of times guessed lots of ways that plots have been heading.
first off, thank you very much for writing this, it is hard work to create a piece of work, and as always there will be a certain kind of person among the many that will always blame others due to their inability to do something, I myself failed to see the clues though it did bug me about why and what he was writing, but I say this though it might not mean much, I am impressed, very much impressed with this chapter, so i ask please dont drop this