Comments of chapter undefined of Winds Of Magic In Hogwarts

This chapter was was not paced properly, second chapter (basically), and its an info dump about his family, and a lot about a dead character.... Get to know the MC, what he did in the past few years, I assume he at least tried to study or at least tried, a bit, to figure out his "perk". All of this should have been given over 3-5 chapters, a bit at a time.

Just call him Elm. I cringe every time I read Elmi.

I have the feeling that Hermione is going to be the romantic partner, which would be horrible, I hate her, all this talk about changing the way house elves think seems like a huge waste of time, who goes to a magical world to waste time about house elves, dance house elves and muggleborns, it's all about magic power and what it can do.

Thank god this mf aint called fred

Too much info dump for me in a single chapter

Okay yeah nope way to jumbled for my taste.

Good chapter . I really hope you don't listen to the comments

Thx

I thank you for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter on a good story.