Comments of chapter undefined of Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT

Your story is very good. Don't listen to these people and their unfounded criticism. It was immediately clear that John would try to improve relations with Dorn, but not with the Martels (almost). And I also agree about the fact that John is still an Outsider, but I feel that he will soon correct this. And I’m looking forward to Nira’s future plot and she is more developed in character, etc. I never doubted you and your writing, never.

While I love this story and can't wait to read about out how Sansa reacts when "horse-face" outshines her in the arts of a Lady (The part I am most looking forward to!); I think the biggest problem people are having with you choosing to have Jon refer to himself as a lord instead of a king in his dealings is the reduction in status it implies. A king is still a king even on foreign soil and is due the respect of his station. Regardless of the fact that he is not "their king" he is still "a king" and thus can still be called "Your Grace, Your Highness, and King Jon" without comitting offense, with only "My King" being disallowed since he is not "their king". In this story, Doran is effectively a territorial governor while Jon is a head of state. By choosing to be addressed as lord by Doran and his vassals, Jon is reducing his status in the eyes of the Dornish from a head of state to a mere representative, which makes things like Oberyn's behavior more likely to occur. When King Jon of Arctica eventually meets with King Robert of Westeros, it has to be a meeting of equals, not an inferior lord meeting with a superior king. Regardless, keep up the good work, I look forward to what happens next!

Thank you for the chapter 😁👍

THE US PRESIDENT IS STILL CALLED PRESIDENT EVEN WHEN HE VISITS A FOREIGN LAND. THE SAME GOES FOR ANY SMALL COUNTRY'S PRESIDENT, PRIME MINISTER AND EVEN KING, BECAUSE THAT IS RESPECT, HOUNOR AND COURTESY THAT THE DORNISH DO NOT HAVE.

thank God you didn't stop. keep going and never give up🥳🥹

Thanks for the chapter 🙏 🙂 😊 🙌 and don't mind the haters. They're always gonna hate. Thanks for keeping this story on this platform!

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter bro. can't wait for Jon to return to winterfell

great chapter

no le hagas caso a la gente que dise cosas estupidas mientras te guste lo que escribas y haya gente que le guste sigue es un gran historia de las que mas espero en mis dias espero que la sigas la verdad me gusta mucho gracias por escribir

An suggestion, he could heal the girl who was hit by the hammer, at least get her out of the critical state, so far there is a lot of enmity between them, this could be used to improve the mood a little, even facilitate the marriage with the daughter who has the blood of the targaryaens.

Your story is very good. Don't take others' words badly. I want to see what will happen when John gets to know his truth. John should talk to Ned that he has a right to know. I also want to see what will be the reaction of Sansa who used to call Arya horse face when John Arya is dropped in the North. It will be fun to see the reaction of king landing as well. The one who used to call him bastard till yesterday has now become the king. By the way thanks for chapter

TFTC

I like ur 5 reason👍😂👍

whens the timeskip author san?

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter 👑

thanks for the Chapter... his response was good... almost expected him to cure Nimerya