Comments of chapter undefined of In Marvel with the Perfect Body...
In Marvel with the Perfect Body...
Aaron_Chong_6689
Chapter comments36
I'll just be honest with everyone here... this fic has fallen off. Since the MC agreed to stay at the mansion everything was ruined, everything was forced. There's no reason to have so many chapters just for a month. Despite his high IQ he's just another stupid Hero that no matter how much his IQ increases he'll always be a simp and generic hero MC.I thought this MC will be different but he's still the same. I've given up on this fic, I can see that from now on all situations will be forced and he'll only be "smart" when situations calls for it. All of the Xmansion chapters could be avoided but no even with his "high IQ" decided to choose a dump decision.All I have to say is that what you all get is a battle junkie MC who's mostly stupid and only smart when the plot decides. I don't even think we'll get a smart mc.I hope you all will enjoy this fic but I've given up on it. You can be a smart MC in Marvel without having to fight in situations that doesn't even need you.Hope y'all have a great journey with this fic, mine just ended.Thank you
isaiah_ramirez:We're only 20 chapters in, and MC is already taking out the Hulk.. What more do you want?
Yea, you lost me too. Have you never read fanfics? More than 2, before writing? It's obvious, it stinks, it is so clear it sad how you didn't even consider readers will notice: The staying with the X-men, the Hulk, the long fight, losing to someone he should win against, that bad performance the X-men leaving and coming back all in the time frame of no disclosed, ALL of that: Ultra instinct: Look how cool and scary the MC is... except it is not the MC, he has no control over it, it adds nothing to the story, its literally plot armor. (ignore comics, movie versions of hulk and wolverine etc, just by what is available here, unless you literally made the Hulk unbeatable which you did not he should have lost). Anyway, I suggest you make yourself rules of writing 1. Do not undermine your own story\plot\details for one cool scene, its not cool. Cool is: MC is stronger, smart, more skilled, faster... MC walks in, fight, MC wins in a cool way, like slamming the hulk head on a mountain or something... fight ends. 2-3 paragraphs. Impressive, cool, fits the plot so far, its actually the MC.
