Comments of chapter undefined of IDIOSYNCRATIC
IDIOSYNCRATIC
Ishioka2593
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MonicaLskLv2MonicaLsk
I'm really enjoying the dialogue between Mitsuhiro and Suzune. It's got a nice, natural flow to it, and the banter is engaging. I also appreciate how Mitsuhiro handles the situation with patience and understanding. It's a great way to build rapport between characters. Maybe you can use more eye-catching titles for each chapter that foretell what the chapter is about. Keep up the good work! Can't wait to read more of your story! đđđ
MonicaLskLv2MonicaLsk
Usually something that lets the reader think what the chapter is about. It's ok you can think about it and edit them later.
Ishioka2593:Thanksss so much for reading, buddy. And i wish i could have but thing is that i don't really what to give as the name of the chapters