Comments of chapter undefined of IDIOSYNCRATIC

Wow, a great chapter. Mitsuhiro's character is intriguing, and I can sense a lot of depth there. The contrast between the school environment and the hardships the students face is a great setup for tension and conflict. The scene where Mitsuhiro stands up against the bullies is awesome! It really shows his character's strength and determination. And that last interaction with the girl he saved leaves me with so many questions, in a good way! A small advice though, maybe you can divide or decrease the length of the two first paragraphs.