Comments of chapter undefined of Blood Lust: The Midnight Resort

Wow, this chapter had some intense action! I could feel the adrenaline rush as Marion and Rube sprang into action to rescue the girls. It was a gripping read with a lot of energy. The tension and suspense were well maintained throughout the chapter. However, when it comes to improving it, consider giving a bit more insight into the characters' emotions and thoughts during the action scenes. This can help readers connect with them on a deeper level and understand their motivations better. Additionally, while the action was thrilling, it might be helpful to provide a bit more context about the situation and the human traffickers earlier in the chapter to give readers a clearer understanding of what's at stake. Overall, it was an exciting chapter, and I'm curious to see how the story develops from here. Keep up the good work!

I would have loved to see the action scene btw them

Talented writer! Loved your story. Looking forward to reading your books in the future! :) ❤️❤️❤️

Bruh... Seriously XD they had an argument first thing hahaha

Interesting start

Wow! Chapter 1 palang pasabog na! it is very easy to understood by youngsters!

It's either she feels indebted or she's in love. hm-hm

I like how the last sentence grabbed me so now I'm intrigued. I wonder what she meant by "it's all for the best"? 🤔

No. No. Don't skip all the hi-ya and pew pew! 😭

AHh nice good intro and nostalgic. this kind of story was unique nowadays

alright this is nice, but I think you could have describe more on the actions, like the battles between the duo and the kidnappers. but overall I love it 🥰🥳🥳🙌

The start of the novel is really good

It's actually so intriguing .The wording is so good and smooth .I wish I could write as good as you write .you did very well keep going

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