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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece:The Lust System

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Overall I like how everything is going, but there are 2 things that confuse me. 1) It seems to me that too often there are moments when girls blush, cry, feel safe next to him, how his smile easily wins hearts and so on. I can’t express it exactly, I forgot the word, but I hope you understand. 2) about the team. many people want people like Kaya and Mikita, and I can’t understand why they are chasing them so much? There is absolutely nothing special about them. Almost every girl from the grand line is superior to them in appearance (especially Kai), their characters are also annoying (I understand that this can be solved simply by a system and words: I love you.). if you need a doctor, just see Reiju. P.s. This is just my opinion and I don't want to offend anyone

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Ren:

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Ren Again :

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Ren with his sword :

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Also Ren :

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Sukuna_rei
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Tftc,I don't know if you've already decided on the MC's ship, but I would suggest Jack Sparrow Black Pearl (google translate)

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Demon_Of_Lust
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It's a good bounty for a start, although Hancock has a higher bounty (80 million is the first bounty on her head), but that's okay, it's not great that the MC is always the one breaking records because that's so cliché.

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Demon_Of_Lust
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thanks for the update as usual

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Guts0626
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Thanks for the chapters, author But what about Nami? Do you also plan to train her with guns like Nojiko? swords? Or do you intend to give her some devil fruit? ( Google Translator )

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Demon_Of_Lust
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It's good to train Nojiko, she might become like Ben Beckman from Red Hair Pirates if she gets stronger with help of the system, you can make her third in command after Ren and Robin who I hope will be the vice captain.

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The_Tube
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thanks for the chapter

iLoveSex
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I found the MC to be very slow when attacking/conquering women for someone who has this type of system.

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Pikatcho
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thanks for the update

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Hollow_Daoist
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thanks for the chapter

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Pikatcho
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Don't forget That KAYA is sick, you need to help her , and also Ussop , That guy loves KAYA and he sure will be your enemie.

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Gabriel_Nunes
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thanks for The chapter

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Dark_Crow_
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Thanks for the chapter. I was thinking, when the MC reaches advanced level or higher in 'rankyaku', you could improve him in swordsmanship, it will be interesting. Also add some kind of concept to his swordsmanship, to live up to the name 'death blade'. Keep up the good work.

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Linda_Nanda
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Thanks for this chapter my friend

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Lucifer_777
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Спасибо за главу