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Comments of chapter undefined of I am Spider-man, I am, The Gamer

Leon_Luis_
Leon_Luis_Lv4Leon_Luis_

i read this chapter in 2 minutes that's how much you used filler words.

ThatDudeGoku
ThatDudeGokuAuthorThatDudeGoku

It is what it is, I am in no way an experienced writer, I hope to improve as I go, but we'll see, do let me know if you have any constructive criticism

Leon_Luis_:my reading speed isn't that fast yet. it took me literally a minute to read through that flowery nonsense. that one chapter was written like i would write an essay when i was a kid bunch of stuff added together to make the essay look longer
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Ash_Isall
Ash_IsallLv4Ash_Isall

An you make him be with aunt may please 🙏