BlackGoku222
yeah like evils saying, you should continue the Naruto part, now it just look like a Chinese style fanfic. Nothing bad with it but not the style we want and were advertised. plus the transition was just too abrupt and the plot of, the girl get pregnant just when he leave and the powerful spy protection fail and the info is leaked to the enemy. let me guess they will attack just before he comes back and he will be very very angry.