Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)

Not even Ash, who is dumber than a rock at this stage of his life, would act the same way, and the MC has the gall to lecture him in previous chapters

Come on author make him suffer more, kill leaf and his pokemon in front of the MC because the truth deserves it, what follows after this the MC is going to cause a pack of tyranitar, let the MC suffer more so he goes crazy like the joker or something similar maybe so matures

I'll leave it here it seems that the Mc doesn't learn anything, he's just a little kid playing at being big

How disappointing the MC comes from suffering in almost all the fic that already borders on the ridiculous

Hopefully the MC dies like this ends this fanfic that protagonist so silly, a recommendation before killing him that his pokemon have the same fate and also Leaf can do NTR to him since you want to make him mature that way

This is the hero who will save the Kanto region from the tyranny of the evil rocket team leader Giovanni and his powerful and terrifying Mewtwo

all this angst. man you certainly love drama. I love action and some drama obviously but overdoing it could be, detrimental for a fic.

what a joke the mc is a complete failure

ignore the comments of salty people being salty people it's a fine story, thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Excellent chapter Author, thank you very much. Nice to see an Annihilape in a fic as well.[img=recommend]