What a bad decision, everything the MC did is going to be only for his brother, after this I wouldn't be surprised if the protagonist changed to Doflamingo

A clear example of how to ruin a fanfiction in 2 chapters, amazing[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

If Crocodile doesn't defeat in the next chapter, the fic will go straight to the trash

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Come on author you can know that you can give us a more pathetic Riser than this I'll pray for you to do it you're the best

This is the hero who will save the Kanto region from the tyranny of the evil rocket team leader Giovanni and his powerful and terrifying Mewtwo

Of the 30 chapters I read, at no time was there any mention of the change of name from Austin to Ash, such a slow and boring plot [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

The author makes all his characters very silly, they see Riser and underestimate him as if they haven't seen what he can do, and to top off another fight in which nothing is going to happen

Very short chapters that do not match the publication rate, to add more than 40 chapters and I do not know yet who is the protagonist of this story the title says one but in the story is another 🤦‍♂️[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

If only the marriage of Rias and Riser had not been canceled we would be saving 133 chapters of unnecessary Chinese plots[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

How naive I was, I thought that because of the title I was going to restart the work xD

4.7 rating is too much for this, I would by far give it 4.0, it is a very disappointing story, it would not be a surprise if the author says he is Chinese

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Unnecessary system[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]