Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)

I swear leaf is going to get him killed or hurt one day doing stupid things in the heat of the moment. Great chapter!

If he needs a water type from Kanto how about horsea that can later evolve into kingdra water/dragon type

this is just pathetic at this point, like author is saying the romance isn't a major part amd this is just to show sole negative side of EM, I call it bull.

A plot point still needs to be fun to read- The whole point of fiction is entertainment, you can't just sacrifice the entire spirit of the book for one plot point and call it no big deal 😭

Thanks for the chapter. I'm okay with the romance but I really don't like Leaf sometimes. Atleast she knows more information about the pokemon world due to being related to Erika so she isn't useless and brings something to the table.

Also it's already the 3 Times he's attacked by a group of pokemon, is it going to be a thing for him ??

It's weird because almost all readers like romance and think it's one of the most important parts of a novel, while not the focus there mist be a bit of romance. But for some reason all of the edgy grindset no girls allowed type of readers are gathering here in this fanfic xD

TFTC,No ad break on this chap...So you get a tbc.

I'm looking forward to how the story progresses. You're doing really good.

Thanks for the chapter, it’s been great. Just hope you can speed up the part of the story which involves leaf tho.