Comments of chapter undefined of Riser Phenex: Flaming Chicken to Burning Phoenix

not bad. I'm not a fan when a character is given crutches from the prologue (when he's already from a noble family and could get and achieve a lot on his own), but at least you don't abuse it, which many local writers can't boast of. Plus, try to reduce the number of exclamation marks in sentences, it will look strange.