Comments of chapter undefined of RWBY: The Spider

Kind of disappointed you never wrote about him being excited about his stronger body and all he can do. Other peoples reaction or him hiding it, any plans for aura. Just glossed all over it and made him seem boring, stupid (no plans), and a pretty plain start to a story despite the good first chapter. If you wanted it this way, you should have just had him start 8 years old or when ever.

I love this

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter on a good story.