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Comments of chapter undefined of RWBY: The Spider

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ErozothDraeor
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I like this idea. Like many novels, this rest almost entirely on the MC and his personality, how capable is he, able to think a head, etc. And in this case, his power, his "cheat" and if it was copied from the original. Spider-Man+Aura? Great, and will likely be good. Nerfed Spider-Man? I would drop it, no questions. On principal I drop any novel that uses pre-existing powers\systems then nerfes them so the MC is not powerful enough so it matches the world power level (something I noticed many do with spider-man specifically for some reason). He is... 25-35 tons, at most, at basic version.

Excal_
Excal_AuthorExcal_

Thanks for the input, Spider-man will not be nerfed, actually buffed since he has an aura plus a semblance (coming soon). I am going to try and keep the MC as close to Spider-Man as possible.

Gerier
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Fangjo
FangjoLv4Fangjo

Honestly, quite a breath of fresh air from all of the fanfics I've read lately. Seems I'll be following along on your journey.

Dragowar
DragowarLv4Dragowar

I like this start it has peaked my interest good job.

Dissapointed_One
Dissapointed_OneLv4Dissapointed_One

Bad chapter. Bad writing.

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story.