Comments of chapter undefined of Oh No, I get stuck with Crazy Name that Stuck me with A crazy Goddess!
I really appreciate you writing such long chapters. I just have one issue. I feel like you’re making each paragraphs too big. It’s difficult to read. Maybe try making them shorter.
I see. Then you can do it at your own pace. Compared to the first few chapters, I really feel that the quality of this novel has increased. Your writing has gotten better.
RikuKage:First off, thank you for the comment. Before, when I did short chapters, people complained, I wrote little paragraphs and they didn't like it and then I did longer ones, they complained, Trust me, I've been getting mixed signals. I try to make some short and some big. like what I'm explaining things, the paragraphs tend to be big. probably next time when I make them pause in the middle of the paragraph instead of just keeping them all together, I'll separate them.
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I kinda feel bad for Freya. What she wanted for so long is so close, but he wants nothing to do with her. He didn't even stop to think that being made for her implies a level of compatibility that can't quite be put into words. He doesn't even realize how similar to Freya he is when it comes to drive, does he?
honestly I'm hoping for a small harem at the very least like 3-4 wives and thats all I want which includes freya but not Lili I am so god dam tired of her in every ff I see anyways trying to do a single heroine in a harem series feels really weird hence why I can settle for a compromise and choose a small harem also ik everyone hates freya and I can see why and agree on alot of parts but I can also see it from a different pov and she's honestly pitiful so make sure to establish some character development for both the mc and freya on another note its been like 9 days since the last chapter I'm hoping we get a new one soon
