RikuKage:Thanks for the comment. But dang, you read fast. I just posted. Sorry real busy with work. I finally had time this weekend to write another chapter.
Rose needs the comedy in her life anyway, she can’t mope around forever and now she invoked Murphy’s law she will get the most eccentric aspiring adventurer of all, and most of all she will like it. Can’t wait for the next chapter! Love how you ended his trip with Robert (hope he becomes a returning character that the mc messes with), and lastly nice chapter!
Again like the last chapter, this chapter just felt completely drawn out. I kinda get where you are going but his interaction with the guards really felt that it was too long. This chapter could have had the interaction with the guards and his interaction with the guild. I get it that you are taking it slow but their is a difference in taking it slow and just extending something that could have easily ended faster than this. Heck, you could have placed the actual talking the when he arrives in guild as all the talking actually matters such as the exposition. Dialogue for the sake of making it long is just unecessary dialogue that really won't be pushing the plot, showing his overall character or building a form of relationship. His interactions with the guard just had the effect of making him annoying to read and not in the good way.