Comments of chapter undefined of How to conquer the hentaiverse

You should put more emphasis on the moans but since it's the first meeting it's fine.

I'll post it here just in case my comment got deleted, also turns out I can give advice [img=Feeling it]

50/50

It has improved a lot, there are no unnecessary exaggerated moans, the dialogue was very good and if you can improve it it will be great but take your time, there is no rush. This is my suggestion if you want to take it or discard it, your decision, but don't put several mcf at the beginning, develop each one in its time and maybe you can do a vote on the next mcf that will appear. Like I said, it's just my suggestion, maybe you already have other plans for the story. Thanks for chapter 8/10.

That's quite good for the first try

Thank you for the chapter.

Better ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Thanks for the chapter, I liked the scene, a question, will it make them pregnant?

That was really good brother 👌. Keep it up, and more and more people will definitely read your story. I give it a 9,9/10. I wanted more hehehe 😂😂

Спасибо за главу

Thanks for the chapter!!!

thanks for the chapter 😺

Much better !!

Thanks for the chap

when is the next chapter coming out?

Thanks for the chapter

TA bueno 🐼💯

Esta bien todo la historia hasta ahora, puedes meter personajes que no sean H para equilibrar la historia y que no sea totalmente sin sentido el rumbo. Asi aprovechas para que el mc tenga "confianza en el amor nuevamente" xD o perdiendo toda la esperanza jaja y tratando de no ser un tipo cornudo a las mujeres de anime xd. Oh por cierto procura que todas tus escenas de H terminen en 1 solo capitulo toma mis piedras de poder.