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I loved the beginning, the characters and interactions between them were good, when he decided to leave it was unexpected but it didn't seem like something bad to me, but everything after that is something very strange, the mc had neither motives nor good reasons to do those barbarities, there are no Nothing in his past or personality that indicates he would escalate to such magnitudes so quickly.
i think the direction of the character progression was great i mean i is one of the really good works in the last few weeks if you wanted to not make him so dark then just kill death row prisoners or set up a mechanism where they kill death row prisoners and collect souls there just think outside the box he just requires the souls not necessarily that those people should be killed by him btw I liked the story as it was but i believe that the new story might just be better so good luck and I hope you do great
Hello author, I understand what you mean, the story became dark and the Mc became a murderer overnight for no real reason, if you allow me, I think you should summarize everything and take a step back to think about the objective and the mv personality Tip: Have you thought about doing this story with the skills of alchemy and magic but in the world of Game of Thrones, even in the House of Dragons. I think it would also be interesting for him to have moral conflicts and not be invincible or become a Gary Stu
