Comments of chapter undefined of Mystery of the Whispering Grove

i absolutely love the way this chapter went! it was like an introduction to god like beings called primordials and an introduction to the mystery of the grove to tell the readers that the actual adventure will begin soon. and i also loved the way you executed the conversation between theo and aria. it was fantastic! it felt like i was watching the serious scenes of a movie where the protagonist learns about the villain or something. i also liked the new character the elder einar. hope he is not an npc tho. and i have noticed that you lowered down the wordplay a little bit too. i thank you for taking my suggestion. *bows in gratitude*

Theoni,it's a captivating chapter. The mystery embedded in the whispers of Grove and the enigmatic presence of the primordials compel me to delve deeper into this novel. Each page unfolds a new layer, urging me to read more and immerse myself further into the storyline.