Rara_Jasmin
Welcome to my imaginative world, where stories unfold adventures and life's values are subtly revealed. Join me on this literary journey. Enjoy the magic!
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The murmur of my father's voice drifted from the dining hall as I eavesdropped from the confines of my room. "Make her beautiful, so she'll capture everyone's eye," he commanded, his tone resonating with an air of authority. Seated at the dining table, he conversed with my mother, and despite my attempts to block it out, their conversation reached my ears.- Rara_Jasmin2mthReplied to ToufiqUlAlam
Ha..ha..sometimes vanishing is best, right? Just joking. I am taking a break from writing.
The murmur of my father's voice drifted from the dining hall as I eavesdropped from the confines of my room. "Make her beautiful, so she'll capture everyone's eye," he commanded, his tone resonating with an air of authority. Seated at the dining table, he conversed with my mother, and despite my attempts to block it out, their conversation reached my ears. - Rara_Jasmin5mthReplied to MonicaLskCh 3 ENIGMATIC ARRIVAL
- Rara_Jasmin5mthReplied to MonicaLsk
Your enthusiastic feedback has truly brightened my day! I'm elated that you enjoyed the story and its descriptive elements. As you continue delving into the narrative, be prepared for twists that will keep you on the edge of your seat and characters that will capture your heart. Get ready for an immersive journey filled with surprises and emotions. Happy reading!
Ch 2 BOUND BY DESTINY - Rara_Jasmin5mthCommented
Your storytelling, Theoni, is nothing short of enchanting! Einar's narrative transported me, weaving a spell that made me feel like a part of the story itself. The poetic finale, those few lines of the poem, painted the Grove in colors so vivid, it left me utterly captivated. Your talent for crafting a tale and eliciting emotions is truly extraordinary!
Ch 4 The First Tree - Rara_Jasmin5mthCommented
interesting...
"The battle raged." Einar's hands clenched, his eyes distant. Theo whispered to Aria, "Could this battle have left a lasting scar on the land?" Aria's gaze was fixed on Einar, her intuition sensing the deeper truth in his words. "And it tore at the very essence of Eldoria, rending the sky with cries of fury and valor. Even now, some say, a remnant of that rage lingers, awaiting a spark to awaken its fury." - Rara_Jasmin5mthReplied to MonicaLskCh 2 Verdant Hollow's Embrace
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Theoni,it's a captivating chapter. The mystery embedded in the whispers of Grove and the enigmatic presence of the primordials compel me to delve deeper into this novel. Each page unfolds a new layer, urging me to read more and immerse myself further into the storyline.
Ch 3 The Primordial Enigma - Rara_Jasmin5mthCommented
mystery....
Gently, Aria unfurled the ancient parchment, revealing cryptic symbols that seemed to dance in the flickering light. "These markings, Theo," she whispered, her voice carrying a blend of awe and reverence. "They're a mystery waiting to be unraveled." - Rara_Jasmin5mthCommented
research...oh...I love it...
"I've been doing some research, and I think I've found something important." - Rara_Jasmin5mthCommented
A funny chapter! The way Mimi talks is really cute, and her name adds a fun element to the chapter.
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There is more... no way...
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Wow, what a name! I also regretted reading that name fully.
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Good chapter...no words...full of twists
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that's the best explanation.
This book has been deleted. - Rara_Jasmin5mthReplied to MonicaLsk
Thank you for your insightful feedback on this chapter; your advice has proven quite helpful. I've already added the details about her dress in the second chapter. Your words are truly appreciated. Thank you once again. Enjoy the journey; it's bound to reach new heights
Ch 1 UNKNOWN FATE - Rara_Jasmin5mthCommented
These lines make me think of Tom and Casey...
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