Comments of chapter undefined of Mystery of the Whispering Grove

I love the one cozy moment in the hills. Where Theo tells his children his story. Also you use the right words and give the story emotion. I like how the two children act when Theo is going to tell them the story. It's a peace of art. The poem is also amazing. Keep the good wok up. I would like to read more of your book.

The writing is incredible but that line "When reality meets mystery, human quests become myths" It's just amazing, it can be deciphered in various ways. The way you portrayed the surroundings. The vocabulary used, it's impeccable. I will be listening to nature's whisper. Loved it!

I actually like the poem I wish I could write something like this. Why do I get Shakespeare vibes from this?

Oh, my friend Theoni, there are no words! It's truly awesome – it captivated me, especially 'The Whispering Grove.' The poem at the end, ohh, indescribable! Your writing is on another level, from the superb background building to the compelling characters like Aria, Theo, and their children. The way their stories unfold within the book is a literary journey that's both enchanting and profound, and the children's adorable dialogues as they share the tales make it even more heartwarming and cute...my friend

oh my god bro..... Honestly i am speechless. I mean the fact that your first language isn't english and still you literally re wrote Shakespeare, it's just phenomenal. I am out of words. The wordplay, the grammar, the medieval style of narrating the story, it's just awesome. I really loved how you made the paragraphs small so that it is easier for us to read and even give inline comments. Anyways as for the story, I love how it started with Theo and Aria being introduced as parents with their children Caleb and Evelyn wanting to listen to a story of their father's adventure about the grove and that Theo starts narrating it. It gives me the vibe that this whole book is just gonna be Theo telling their kids a story like you see in some movies. And I also loved that song at the end! It was super good! How did you even make that?

Caleb and Evelyn's curiosity and youthful energy are evident throughout the text! I appreciate how the author skillfully chooses simpler language when it came to the children's dialogue, as they are still young and should not be expected to behave like adults.

I really like this story so far! Also, the poem you composed at the end caught my attention. I can read it in a certain voice and it’s something that truly stands out. Kudos to you, author!

Amazing! Truly captivating, this was like a movie unraveling in my mind.

It's a nice way to start your story. This chapter really gives a deep meaning to the title of your novel. Also, the poem / prophecy you created at the last part of the chapter is really interesting.

I liked the beginning of the story, I hope you continue with this great work.

Gives me 'Name of the Wind' vibes.

Nice chapter author! Good portrayal of the mystery

NAW, THEO IS HERE TOO??

its interesting