Comments of chapter undefined of Game Of Thrones: Another Dragons

Please change the dialogue format, there’s no need to have the name of who speaks and the way they speak before what what they say, it is pretty obvious from context clues, if you want to make a character seem like they’re crying or something like that you can make them stutter a bit or add that tears were running down their face, but all that text before the sentences makes it very hard to read and comprehend

Thanks for chapter more please chapter

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Great chapter, it was nice that he calm Rhaeny

Come on!!! Why can't we just met a dragon till the end!! Even if it illusion. Well, thanks

Thanks for the chapter and more please

Thanks for chapter

Thanks for the hard work

Why? I was waiting so much for him to interact with the og characters, and it turns into this cringe thing with him pretending to be Rhaegar? Seiously, it was so bad to see him saying all of those "my love", "i am back", and all of those things while being an ilusion of the guy. It was unnecesary and (to me) it ruined a moment that had everything to be epic. He could have just used his voice or taken any random shape to talk to them and convince them to live that place.

That was such a terrible paragraph

Thxs for the chap

Jay's act as Rhaegar truly necessary?

I thank you for the chapter.