TFTC. More please!!!

TFTC. MORE PLEASE

TFTC! More please!!!

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It was a simple evaluation, the author decides in the end, as always. And there are many authors who, when focusing on just one work, manage to maintain quality with this number of weekly chapters, that is, 7~10.

So tell me who could help the MC in George Martin's entire universe? There are none except the deities. The Starks also didn't play intrigue games with the MC like any other southern house would.

Two bizarre errors in fact.

Wrong once again. Several of the jutsus used in the academy (rank E, the lowest rank) have neutral chakra, as do water walking and tree climbing and others. All of these jutsus are not infused with elemental chakra, as they would not work. And medical jutsus would also not have an infusion of elements because it is as unnecessary as in other jutsus I mentioned before. Author, stop establishing new concepts where everything is ok, doing so is just filler. You were establishing several good concepts, but you got this one and the elemental stones wrong.

He didn't become a servant, he became a de facto friend of the Stark family and influenced them positively. Basically you consider any type of positive interaction equal to servitude.

Author, you don't learn, do you? The injured MC letting the jounin complete the transformation was pure idiocy, demonstrate more reality and less trashy parts of the anime. Who in their right mind would let others prepare for a deadly battle? And the fight against this jounin didn't look like a fight between ninjas at all, with the exception of the use of jutsus.

You can write other works, without any problem, in fact it is even positive that you write other things besides the work you are publishing. But the big problem is that you are definitely a beginner and DO NOT HAVE THE ABILITY to commit to publishing several works at the same time. Many professional writers don't have it, why would you? Be humble. You will be JUST another author who wanted to embrace the world, you won't be able to, you will receive a storm of negative reviews, insults, etc., and then you will stop writing because you no longer feel pleasure from it.

You can write other works, without any problem, in fact it is even positive that you write other things besides the work you are publishing. But the big problem is that you are definitely a beginner and DO NOT HAVE THE ABILITY to commit to publishing several works at the same time. Many professional writers don't have it, why would you? Be humble. You will be JUST another author who wanted to embrace the world, you won't be able to, you will receive a storm of negative reviews, insults, etc., and then you will stop writing because you no longer feel pleasure from it.

For this story to return to a minimum quality or even become great, the author would have to modify almost everything from the last 10~15 chapters, delete many things, advance the plot, change several things in the general script, modify concepts that he himself established and etc. But he's not going to do that, quite the opposite, he's going to continue doing the same or worse because he currently has MANY works. Whether a reader complains or not, the author usually doesn't even reflect when a criticism is made, much less repair the widespread errors he made in several works. An extremely simple example that would make the script much better in this work is the lack of several basic E, D and C rank jutsus that Mc should have. Accepting that you are wrong or that someone else has a point is difficult, especially when there are many readers who are idiots or who accept any rubbish.

I'll drop it. This story had everything to be VERY good, but the author is writing ONLY as a trade. The same thing that happens in this work happens in his other works. If the author's job is to be a writer, then he is in a horrible situation. Filler chapters, absurd plot holes, excess of published works. Basically the author wanted to embrace the world without any planning or care, destroying himself in the process. This probably happens because even though quality is constantly reduced, the money remains in the bank account, so private life is pleasant. When money (private life) is affected because of the quality of the chapters, then he will start to do something decent, but it will be a dead end.

I'll drop it. This story had everything to be VERY good, but the author is writing ONLY as a trade. The same thing that happens in this work happens in his other works. If the author's job is to be a writer, then he is in a horrible situation. Filler chapters, absurd plot holes, excess of published works. Basically the author wanted to embrace the world without any planning or care, destroying himself in the process. This probably happens because even though quality is constantly reduced, the money remains in the bank account, so private life is pleasant. When money (private life) is affected because of the quality of the chapters, then he will start to do something decent, but it will be a dead end.

Do you know all the powers and capabilities of Solomon of Fate? The author can make the MC discover the entire plot as soon as the author wants.

According to the author's words, the MC does not own: The forests south of Ibben, red desert, Qarth and the region close to Qarth (with the exception of some things like Yosh), and they are things you added to this map. The ones you didn't add that the MC owns are: The basilisk islands, New Ghis, the mountains near Mantarys (not the region south of Mantarys. Just Mantarys, the north and sides); and the MC still dominates the entire Dothraki Sea where its borders go close to the domains of Qohor and Volantis. These cities (Qohor and Volantis) form a rough line on the map, but not the cities literally marked on the map which are the borders between Xandar and these cities, but the domains of these cities such as the forests of Qohor and so on which are the lines of border.

1° Don't let it fall, this story has a lot, A LOT of potential. 2° Try to maintain the MC's individuality as a normal person, but without eliminating Solomon's traits. 3° Increase the number of chapters by 10 per week. 7 of which are daily and another 3 according to goals for comments, reviews and Power Stones. 4° I haven't paid attention until now, but if you don't have a Patreon or other form of sponsorship, I strongly recommend that you start finding out about all these details, literally all the details about it. You can earn a good amount of money this way.

The only defect so far is the low number of chapters (12), the rest, especially the naturalness between the relationships, the conversations, the script and its rhythm of the story (progression of time within the story) is sensational. Nothing is exaggerated, everything in the right proportion.

The only defect so far is the low number of chapters, the rest, especially the naturalness between the relationships, conversations, the script and its rhythm of the story (progression of time within the story) is sensational. Nothing is exaggerated, everything in the right proportion.